This is the first part of my annoying story and I would just like to know what you thought of it.


Anna came home from school. The door was closed and she couldn't be bothered going and getting the key because she was exhausted. Se also wanted to let every one in the house know she was home. She had heard another baby was coming. Mum said somewhere in the next two weeks and if that baby was born Mum was saying then she may not get be getting all of the attention. She suddenly realised she was still at the door and no one had answered. She wanted something to drink and something to eat. She heard some shouting from inside. So Mum and Dad were home but they weren't letting her inside. She put her head closer to the door to see if she could hear what they were saying. She heard it. "YOU GET THE DOOR", "NO YOU GET IT" "CANT YOU SEE I'M DEALING WITH THIS BABY". It had happened. She had a baby brother or sister