Thursday, November 10, 2011

jake's annoying story

Mike was the average kid living in an average household doing average things taking everything averagely except one thing...bullying.Mike despised bullys down to the very last bone but did nothing about it.His mother always pestered him to do something but he wouldn't have any of it even his best friend who has been bullyed tried to get him to do something but failed.But one day something extrotdinary happened.Mike was going out for a ride on his new scooter with hisfriend Jack ,suddenly, a tight hand yanked him from his scooter.He tried to struggle free but the hand was to tight " to easy ," a teenager that looked 16 came into view, he was holding mikes scooter."Like taking candy from a baby," he said " give it back ," said Mike fearfully "wimps can't do anything," the thug sneered back and off they went...with the scooter.

to be continued

2 comments:

  1. Gripping stuff, Jake, really love the language you're using. Looking forward to the next instalment!

    Dad

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  2. wow jake that story makes me cant wait until the next bit of the story comes out

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