Wednesday, November 30, 2011

Latoyah's Out post

Standing in a tin shack.Louise has never been so dehydrated before. She stared to get sick. There were no sign of people. No phone. No nothing. She was missing her friends and her friends were missing her. The night before the stars shone so bright like never before. They lit up the night sky. It was so different to home. At night it was like the stars were trying to say something to her. It was hard to tell what they were saying. She tried and tried to think what they were trying to say but she just couldn't. The next night the same thing happened. She looked closely and it started showing words. It said the way home is?....

Caitlins annoying story part 2

I must go and get the key to find out what the baby looks like. She went to get the key but Anna had bare feet and got a prickle in her foot as she walked down the grass to get the key. She lifted up the brick trying to ignore the pain that the prickle was causing in her foot. The key wasn't there. Anna sat down and pulled the prickle out of her foot. She ran back to the door and put a hand up to knock again and she noticed something she had missed before. A note. She pulled down the note and read.

Dear Anna

Go round the back. Doors unlocked. We have a surprise for you

Love Mum
A surprise. She hurried round the back. She ran inside and there was the key on the bench. Anna went into the living room and there was the baby and mum and dad were fussing over it. Its your surprise said mum. Oh thought Anna that's not such a great surprise.

outpost by Kobe - Part One

Bob woke up and he felt thirsty. He was so sweaty at night-time it felt like it he went toilet in his bed. He wished that he could just pick up a cup and go to the tap and get some water. But poor him.The only way he could have a drink is keep on spitting in a bucket and when there's heaps he drinks it. He had a sore back because his bed had no mattress. He has not had something to eat since he had a snail two days ago. Every second day he goes out and tries to find something to eat. This is the second day today.

Part 2 of Jake's annoying story.

"That was a new scooter Jack" exclaimed Mike "brand new" " well look on the bright side..." said Jack " there is no bright side!"yelled Mike " my scooter has been stolen and I've been bullied!"."Well then maybe you know how I feel! " yelled Jack. Mike didn't reply he just ran home and slammed the door after him. You could hear him in his room crashing and bashing for about 5 minutes until it suddenly went quiet as a mouse.Mike was tossing and turning all night would it work would it fail would he get told off would he get congratulated... he didn't know.When morning finally came he was ready to put his plan into action " it's going to work don't worry Mike" he said to himself.Three weeks later Mike's family was going for a walk when his mother spotted something " Mike is that your work on the tree ?" for sitting on the tree was a poster about anti-bullying "yep sure is" Mike replied.Over the next few weeks the amount of people being bullied dropped fast and people seemed happier but none was as happy as Mike.

Friday, November 25, 2011

Raffle for a ride

Today was Raffle for a ride and in our class Leah won a ride on a Quad bike, Taine won a ride on a Harley and Georgia won a ride in a stock with Peter Ree's. Leah thought that the ride was awesome.Taine thought that it was really fun and Georgia thought that the ride in the stock car was exiting.

Friday, November 18, 2011

Korie's Outpost Story

It was real. He was scared to bits. He was lost on a desert with no food, no water and no friends. He burst into tears. After ten minutes he stopped crying and started to look around . Woah! What is this? its BIG and OLD. Its like a COFFIN so scary it gave me GOOSE BUMPS. I need to get out. There's a door going out side. I see a boy. "hey hello" he likes rugby like me. Yeah this is easy. "Can I play", "sure" he said. "So you like rugby", "yeah". "Is there a rugby team at your school?" "yeah the best", "great". Moving here might not be so bad after all.

Wednesday, November 16, 2011

Making Bread with Jen and Amelia

This is a small movie about when we made bread. Jen and I (Amelia) give you cooking tips, advice and awesomeness.Please leave a comment and tell us what you think about the movie, or give usand idea on what to make next week!


This is the first part of my annoying story and I would just like to know what you thought of it.


Anna came home from school. The door was closed and she couldn't be bothered going and getting the key because she was exhausted. Se also wanted to let every one in the house know she was home. She had heard another baby was coming. Mum said somewhere in the next two weeks and if that baby was born Mum was saying then she may not get be getting all of the attention. She suddenly realised she was still at the door and no one had answered. She wanted something to drink and something to eat. She heard some shouting from inside. So Mum and Dad were home but they weren't letting her inside. She put her head closer to the door to see if she could hear what they were saying. She heard it. "YOU GET THE DOOR", "NO YOU GET IT" "CANT YOU SEE I'M DEALING WITH THIS BABY". It had happened. She had a baby brother or sister

Thursday, November 10, 2011

jake's annoying story

Mike was the average kid living in an average household doing average things taking everything averagely except one thing...bullying.Mike despised bullys down to the very last bone but did nothing about it.His mother always pestered him to do something but he wouldn't have any of it even his best friend who has been bullyed tried to get him to do something but failed.But one day something extrotdinary happened.Mike was going out for a ride on his new scooter with hisfriend Jack ,suddenly, a tight hand yanked him from his scooter.He tried to struggle free but the hand was to tight " to easy ," a teenager that looked 16 came into view, he was holding mikes scooter."Like taking candy from a baby," he said " give it back ," said Mike fearfully "wimps can't do anything," the thug sneered back and off they went...with the scooter.

to be continued

Haleighs Outpost Story

In class we had to write stories about a person stranded in the desert by themselves and they had to head to the sign posts, here is mine hope you like it!!!!

I decided to make the most terrible decision I could ever make. I'm going to the sign posts!! I've heard stories of the sign posts. They apparently bring signs of life and food.
I tied a piece of cloth to my face to stop being sun burnt. Bare foot this would take me ages. I set off towards the sun to start the journey that would change my life forever.

By Haleigh!